Tuesday, April 1, 2008
feflection blog on mutlimodal project
My assignment on eBay and society has great relevance I think. When researching this topic I brought even my own experiences with the topic in as well. There are several good and bad things that can contribute to my report. EBay has not only helped and yet hindered me but it has done so to others I know as well. My information was a lot of testimonials and facts that came directly from eBay. These things made stuff more believable to me keeping in mind that other experiences are out there. The point I was trying to further with me report was not only has eBay helped out economy in general but also in other ways it has as well hurt our economy. EBay trades with thirty-nine global markets which takes money out of circulation and distributes it to other. While I use eBay I try not to purchase anything from out of the country for two reasons mainly because it may not come and it make not be what you were expecting. Now maybe I do not buy from another countries other consumers may still do so. I felt that the one shortcoming I had in my paper was that I did not include enough hard evidence about something’s I presented. I kept only to the basics but I still went a small amount in depth about problems, but there was so much more I could have put in there. I could have even used the information I said above t o make it more definite. Also my grammar could have been clearer. The layout of the project I thought was good though it was easily labeled to go from one place to another thru out my project. Overall minus the hard evidence and the grammar mistakes I think it was well thought out.
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i think you picked an interesting topic. ebay deff. has its pros and cons that my family has experienced as well. we bought a movie from ebay and they gave us a crappy bootleg and when we tried to email them about it, they were all of a sudden gone. so ebay has its good and bad
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